Circles - Revision history

Sara at 05:01, 3 March 2007

2007-03-03T05:01:53Z

2007-03-03T05:00:35Z

2006-09-05T16:04:55Z

‎Comments

2006-08-31T05:52:59Z

2006-08-30T18:48:30Z

‎structure

2006-08-30T18:24:17Z

2006-08-30T18:23:50Z

2006-08-29T23:07:16Z

‎Lyrics

2006-08-29T21:44:36Z

2006-08-29T20:51:35Z

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 [[Media:Circles.mp3|circles]]
 [[Image:Breakupbunny.jpg|thumb|why is there a bunny?]]
 == Lyrics ==
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 [[User:Gabemcelwain|Gabemcelwain]] 09:04, 5 September 2006 (PDT)

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 == Comments ==
 this song could have been on any of depeche mode's first three albums.  which means that it's excellent for so many reasons.  i just hear dave gahan singing this.  take that as a compliment.
 pop structure = gold.  give me that refrain fifteen seconds in.  hell, yeah. the transition from the refrain back to the verse is a little non-existent, but it totally works.  organ solo bridge = yes.  also very martin gore.  the repeated figure over the last four bars is inspired genius.  i'm not entirely sold on the refrain/refrain with more bass notes/let it gooooooo/can't let gooooo/refrain breakdown ending.  i think if the arrangment changes were a bit more drastic, you could pull it off.  the refrain is short, and the song is short, so it isn't a time issue, it just needs to change sonically if you're going to repeat it so many times in a row.
 [[Category: Songs]]

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 == Author's Notes ==
 == Comments ==
 [[Gabe mcelwain (chicago)]] says:

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 == Music ==
 === structure ===
-v-c-v-c-b-v-c-c-c-c<br>
+a-b-a-b-c-a-b-b-b-b<br>
 === key ===
 c#m (i think?)<br>

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   let it go
-  it goes around
+  and it goes around
   after you're gone
   your gravity weighs me down
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   i'd shout round the world if it would turn your head
   my breathless silence sends you around the bend
-  the silence stays like you never did
+  the silence remains like you never did
   let it go

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	pop structure = gold. give me that refrain fifteen seconds in. hell, yeah. the transition from the refrain back to the verse is a little non-existent, but it totally works. organ solo bridge = yes. also very martin gore. the repeated figure over the last four bars is inspired genius. i'm not entirely sold on the refrain/refrain with more bass notes/let it gooooooo/can't let gooooo/refrain breakdown ending. i think if the arrangment changes were a bit more drastic, you could pull it off. the refrain is short, and the song is short, so it isn't a time issue, it just needs to change sonically if you're going to repeat it so many times in a row.		pop structure = gold. give me that refrain fifteen seconds in. hell, yeah. the transition from the refrain back to the verse is a little non-existent, but it totally works. organ solo bridge = yes. also very martin gore. the repeated figure over the last four bars is inspired genius. i'm not entirely sold on the refrain/refrain with more bass notes/let it gooooooo/can't let gooooo/refrain breakdown ending. i think if the arrangment changes were a bit more drastic, you could pull it off. the refrain is short, and the song is short, so it isn't a time issue, it just needs to change sonically if you're going to repeat it so many times in a row.
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	pop structure = gold. give me that refrain fifteen seconds in. hell, yeah. the transition from the refrain back to the verse is a little non-existent, but it totally works. organ solo bridge = yes. also very martin gore. the repeated figure over the last four bars is inspired genius. i'm not entirely sold on the refrain/refrain with more bass notes/let it gooooooo/can't let gooooo/refrain breakdown ending. i think if the arrangment changes were a bit more drastic, you could pull it off. the refrain is short, and the song is short, so it isn't a time issue, it just needs to change sonically if you're going to repeat it so many times in a row.		pop structure = gold. give me that refrain fifteen seconds in. hell, yeah. the transition from the refrain back to the verse is a little non-existent, but it totally works. organ solo bridge = yes. also very martin gore. the repeated figure over the last four bars is inspired genius. i'm not entirely sold on the refrain/refrain with more bass notes/let it gooooooo/can't let gooooo/refrain breakdown ending. i think if the arrangment changes were a bit more drastic, you could pull it off. the refrain is short, and the song is short, so it isn't a time issue, it just needs to change sonically if you're going to repeat it so many times in a row.
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