Electric City - Revision history

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2007-03-29T20:58:00Z

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2007-03-16T19:22:02Z

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Gabemcelwain at 19:20, 16 March 2007

2007-03-16T19:20:44Z

Rastark at 20:08, 13 March 2007

2007-03-13T20:08:25Z

Rastark at 20:04, 13 March 2007

2007-03-13T20:04:30Z

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[[Category:Songs]]

[[Media:Electric_city.mp3|Electric city]]

== Lyrics ==
I've been down every one of the streets in this town
too many times, too many times
if i could fight i could make me some money tonight
with these hands of mine, with these hands of mine

i've told lies and I've known some lying men
but i swear to god I never lied to him
but he turned around, blew a hole in the solid ground
electric city got me down

ch: one hand fits where the other one don't
one foot follows where the other one won't
if there's a bad man driving the train won't stop but it'll pick me up

i've been down to the dock at the edge of town
to ease my mind too many times
if I was all right I could make me some money tonight
but I can't decide, I can't decide

cause there's a task at hand down where all of those buildings stand
built six feet wide and ten stories high
i could see them all shot to shit with a wrecking ball
in the dead of night, noone in sight

ch repeats

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 * If I could change anything about this recording, I'd throw in a little dynamic variation.  I'd love to hear a little country shuffle rhythm section and a harmonica stumble in on chorus.  This is a minor quibble, though--since the song is so short, I don't mind the sameness of the arrangement, I'm just greedy. : )
 * Yay!  Thanks for putting this up, it's making my last several days.
 P.S. I think some of your lyrics got pasted into the notes section, so i moved them up into the top section.  I also put some "pre" tags around them so the line breaks happen where you typed them.  You can remove them if you don't like it this way, but I thought it might help.
 [[User:Gabemcelwain|Gabemcelwain]] 12:21, 16 March 2007 (PDT)

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 * Yay!  Thanks for putting this up, it's making my last several days.
-P.S. I think some of your lyrics got pasted into the notes section, so i moved them up into the top section.  I also put some "pre" tags around them so the line breaks happen where you typed them.  You can remove them if you don't like it this way, but I thougt it might help.
+P.S. I think some of your lyrics got pasted into the notes section, so i moved them up into the top section.  I also put some "pre" tags around them so the line breaks happen where you typed them.  You can remove them if you don't like it this way, but I thought it might help.
 [[User:Gabemcelwain|Gabemcelwain]] 12:21, 16 March 2007 (PDT)

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	P.S. I think some of your lyrics got pasted into the notes section, so i moved them up into the top section. I also put some "pre" tags around them so the line breaks happen where you typed them. You can remove them if you don't like it this way, but I thougt it might help.		P.S. I think some of your lyrics got pasted into the notes section, so i moved them up into the top section. I also put some "pre" tags around them so the line breaks happen where you typed them. You can remove them if you don't like it this way, but I thougt it might help.
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		+	[[User:Gabemcelwain\|Gabemcelwain]] 12:21, 16 March 2007 (PDT)

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 == Lyrics ==
 I've been down every one of the streets in this town
 too many times, too many times
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 if I was all right I could make me some money tonight
 but I can't decide, I can't decide
 cause there's a task at hand down where all of those buildings stand
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 ch repeats