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Robertvoyer at 23:45, 14 June 2008

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Robertvoyer at 23:45, 14 June 2008

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Conorl: /* Comments */

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Gabemcelwain at 22:51, 10 June 2008

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Conorl at 13:57, 5 June 2008

2008-06-05T13:57:12Z

Conorl at 13:54, 5 June 2008

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Conorl at 16:12, 11 May 2008

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	These are killer ideas!! I was thinking it could use some oooohs earlier in the song for the chorus with no synth. Check out the video at: http://deirdreandconor.wordpress.com/		These are killer ideas!! I was thinking it could use some oooohs earlier in the song for the chorus with no synth. Check out the video at: http://deirdreandconor.wordpress.com/
	[[User:Conorl\|Conorl]] 13:14, 11 June 2008 (PDT)		[[User:Conorl\|Conorl]] 13:14, 11 June 2008 (PDT)
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		+	Hot damn! Fantastic. The guitar sound is sublime. The layering and instrumentation. I love it. So superbly lo-fi and awesome. Yeah.
		+	[[User:Robertvoyer\|Robertvoyer]] 18:45, 14 June 2008 (PDT)

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	These are killer ideas!! I was thinking it could use some oooohs earlier in the song for the chorus with no synth. Check out the video at: http://deirdreandconor.wordpress.com/		These are killer ideas!! I was thinking it could use some oooohs earlier in the song for the chorus with no synth. Check out the video at: http://deirdreandconor.wordpress.com/
	[[User:Conorl\|Conorl]] 13:14, 11 June 2008 (PDT)		[[User:Conorl\|Conorl]] 13:14, 11 June 2008 (PDT)
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−	~~Hot damn! Fantastic. The guitar sound is sublime. The layering and instrumentation. I love it. So superbly lo-fi and awesome. Yeah.~~

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	These are killer ideas!! I was thinking it could use some oooohs earlier in the song for the chorus with no synth. Check out the video at: http://deirdreandconor.wordpress.com/		These are killer ideas!! I was thinking it could use some oooohs earlier in the song for the chorus with no synth. Check out the video at: http://deirdreandconor.wordpress.com/
	[[User:Conorl\|Conorl]] 13:14, 11 June 2008 (PDT)		[[User:Conorl\|Conorl]] 13:14, 11 June 2008 (PDT)
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		+	Hot damn! Fantastic. The guitar sound is sublime. The layering and instrumentation. I love it. So superbly lo-fi and awesome. Yeah.

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	I also had this vision of the video for this where during that part, DK puts on some headphones, presumably to listen to the playback of your latest recording. At first hopeful, she quickly wrinkles up her nose, shakes her head, and gives a big thumbs down to someone offscreen. We pan over to Conor, who gives her the shoulder shug/hands in the air "what do you want from me?" gesture. Hilarious?		I also had this vision of the video for this where during that part, DK puts on some headphones, presumably to listen to the playback of your latest recording. At first hopeful, she quickly wrinkles up her nose, shakes her head, and gives a big thumbs down to someone offscreen. We pan over to Conor, who gives her the shoulder shug/hands in the air "what do you want from me?" gesture. Hilarious?
	[[User:Gabemcelwain\|Gabemcelwain]] 13:06, 11 June 2008 (PDT)		[[User:Gabemcelwain\|Gabemcelwain]] 13:06, 11 June 2008 (PDT)
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		+	These are killer ideas!! I was thinking it could use some oooohs earlier in the song for the chorus with no synth. Check out the video at: http://deirdreandconor.wordpress.com/
		+	[[User:Conorl\|Conorl]] 13:14, 11 June 2008 (PDT)

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	This is really great, you two! I love all the layering, how each of you does two different octaves. It sounds different from everything else you've done and gives this tune its own special texture. Lots of good lyrics here, I'm partial to the "ethereal/materal" rhyme, "spry" and "pounce" are well-played, also. Finally, kazoos are always welcome. Excellent! [[User:Gabemcelwain\|Gabemcelwain]] 15:51, 10 June 2008 (PDT)		This is really great, you two! I love all the layering, how each of you does two different octaves. It sounds different from everything else you've done and gives this tune its own special texture. Lots of good lyrics here, I'm partial to the "ethereal/materal" rhyme, "spry" and "pounce" are well-played, also. Finally, kazoos are always welcome. Excellent! [[User:Gabemcelwain\|Gabemcelwain]] 15:51, 10 June 2008 (PDT)
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		+	Just had this idea that the bridge, or second verse, the part after, "well there's one thing" where you talk about lo-fi sounds might be kind of awesome if it was spoken rather than sung (maybe just one or two of the vocal layers?), or if the arrangement changed up there somehow.
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		+	I also had this vision of the video for this where during that part, DK puts on some headphones, presumably to listen to the playback of your latest recording. At first hopeful, she quickly wrinkles up her nose, shakes her head, and gives a big thumbs down to someone offscreen. We pan over to Conor, who gives her the shoulder shug/hands in the air "what do you want from me?" gesture. Hilarious?
		+	[[User:Gabemcelwain\|Gabemcelwain]] 13:06, 11 June 2008 (PDT)

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	== Comments ==		== Comments ==

−	This is really great, you two! I love all the layering, how each of you do different octaves. It sounds different from everything else you've done and gives this tune its own special texture. Lots of good lyrics here, I'm partial to the "ethereal/materal" rhyme, "spry" and "pounce" are well-played, also. Finally, kazoos are always welcome. Excellent! [[User:Gabemcelwain\|Gabemcelwain]] 15:51, 10 June 2008 (PDT)	+	This is really great, you two! I love all the layering, how each of you does two different octaves. It sounds different from everything else you've done and gives this tune its own special texture. Lots of good lyrics here, I'm partial to the "ethereal/materal" rhyme, "spry" and "pounce" are well-played, also. Finally, kazoos are always welcome. Excellent! [[User:Gabemcelwain\|Gabemcelwain]] 15:51, 10 June 2008 (PDT)

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	We're still working on this		We're still working on this
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		+	== Comments ==
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		+	This is really great, you two! I love all the layering, how each of you do different octaves. It sounds different from everything else you've done and gives this tune its own special texture. Lots of good lyrics here, I'm partial to the "ethereal/materal" rhyme, "spry" and "pounce" are well-played, also. Finally, kazoos are always welcome. Excellent! [[User:Gabemcelwain\|Gabemcelwain]] 15:51, 10 June 2008 (PDT)

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 [[Category:Songs]]
 [[Category:Conor (philadelphia)]]
-[[gift registry3.mp3|gift registry]]
+[[media: gift registry3.mp3|gift registry]]
 == Lyrics ==

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   it's related to our technology
   not exactly the cutting edge
-  it's more like the other edge
+  more like the other edge
   we use what we have