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[[Category:Songs]]

[[Image:sf1.jpg|thumb|every day is foggy]]

[[Media:lfmverby.mp3|look for me]]

== Lyrics ==
you wake up alone
shake the haze of forgotten dreams
your thoughts thick with unspoken things

you walk out alone
under gloomy clouds that still the air
the sun must be up there somewhere

open up your eyes
see through the fog and find me
on any cloudy day i'm waiting
look for me

i go out alone
lost in mist that pens me in
a vague outline of the shape we're in

i think of your smile
eyes like sunlight breaking through
a warmer world than the one i knew

open up your eyes
see through the fog and find me
on any cloudy day i'll be waiting
look for me
please look for me
look for me!

you say we're lost
i say we're both here
so take my hand
and it'll be clear

== Music ==
=== Chords ===
?????

=== Structure ===
a-a-b-c-a-a-b-c-d

== Author's Notes ==
this is me making up words and melodies to someone else's pre-recorded guitar part. as such is an experiment.

== Comments ==

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 == Author's Notes ==
-this is the first recording of my nonband! it is a live studio recording. i wrote the words and melody and someone else wrote and played the guitar part. i think the words are a little ungainly in a few places, particularly the lines with "gloomy" and "mist" in them. and the line "i think of your smile" is so gross. i'm pretty happy with the chorus, i think it walks a fine cheesy line but for some reason it seems more cute than grating. i like the end a lot, although maybe the melody does not make sense in context. there's going to be a bit more of an outtro but it hasn't been written yet. i'll keep updating the mp3 when we add more to it.
+this is the first recording of my nonband! it is a live studio recording. i wrote the words and melody and someone else wrote and played the guitar part. i think the words are a little ungainly in a few places, particularly the lines with "gloomy" and "mist" in them. and the line "i think of your smile" is so gross. i'm pretty happy with the chorus, i think it walks a fine cheesy line but for some reason it seems more cute than grating. i like the end a lot, although maybe the melody does not make sense in context. there's going to be a bit more of an outtro but it hasn't been written yet. i'll keep updating the mp3 when we add more to it.<br>
 == Comments ==

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 [[Image:IMG_0078.JPG|thumb|every single day]]
-[[Media:lfmverby.mp3|look for me]]
+[[Media:091706-1stDraftB&S.mp3|look for me]]
 == Lyrics ==

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 [[Category:Songs]]
-[[Image:sf1.jpg|thumb|every single day]]
+[[Image:IMG_0078.JPG|thumb|every single day]]
 [[Media:lfmverby.mp3|look for me]]

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   you wake up alone
   shake the haze of forgotten dreams
-  your thoughts thick with unspoken things
+  thoughts thick with unspoken things
   you walk out alone
-  under gloomy clouds that still the air
+  gloomy clouds that still the air
   the sun must be up there somewhere
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   i go out alone
   lost in mist that pens me in
-  a vague outline of the shape we're in
+  vague outline of the shape we're in
   i think of your smile
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   look for me
   please look for me
   you say we're lost
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 == Author's Notes ==
-this is me making up words and melodies to someone else's pre-recorded guitar part. as such is an experiment.
+this is the first recording of my nonband! it is a live studio recording. i wrote the words and melody and someone else wrote and played the guitar part. i think the words are a little ungainly in a few places, particularly the lines with "gloomy" and "mist" in them. and the line "i think of your smile" is so gross. i'm pretty happy with the chorus, i think it walks a fine cheesy line but for some reason it seems more cute than grating. i like the end a lot, although maybe the melody does not make sense in context. there's going to be a bit more of an outtro but it hasn't been written yet. i'll keep updating the mp3 when we add more to it.
 == Comments ==

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 === Structure ===
-a-a-b-c-a-a-b-c-d
+a-b-c-c-a-b-c-c-a-d-e-?
 == Author's Notes ==