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Sara at 05:05, 3 March 2007

2007-03-03T05:05:47Z

Sara: /* Author's Notes */

2006-12-18T18:45:16Z

‎Author's Notes

Sara: /* Lyrics */

2006-12-18T18:43:35Z

‎Lyrics

Sara: /* Chords */

2006-12-18T18:42:41Z

‎Chords

Sara at 18:40, 18 December 2006

2006-12-18T18:40:24Z

Sara at 18:39, 18 December 2006

2006-12-18T18:39:46Z

Sara at 22:03, 16 December 2006

2006-12-16T22:03:45Z

Sara: /* Chords */

2006-12-16T19:31:32Z

‎Chords

Sara at 19:30, 16 December 2006

2006-12-16T19:30:40Z

Sara: /* Author's Notes */

2006-12-14T23:56:27Z

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 [[User:Sara|Sara]] 11:30, 16 December 2006 (PST): i scrapped the middle section and wrote a shorter, vocal-free bridge that just basically gives you a break from the verses. i also reworked it for guitar so it is (theoretically) less boring. i have not recorded the new version yet.<br>
 == Comments ==

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   but fall against my window pane
   you're brighter than the burning sun
-  but if you melt my heart away it runs
+  you melt my heart away it runs
   your arms could briefly trap me here
   but conquering is out my dear

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 === Chords ===
 verse:<br>
-C major, D major, Bb major 7, G major x 3<br>
+C major, D major, Bb major 7, G major x 2<br>
 C major, D major, Bb major 7, C major x 1<br>
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 i'm thinking of adding oohs over the verses, or maybe slower words instead of oohs. i want to add more instruments but i kind of want this to be a rock song. rock is hard. haha! urg. i also was up til 3AM writing this.<br>
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-[[User:Sara|Sara]] 11:30, 16 December 2006 (PST): i scrapped the middle section and wrote a shorter, vocal-free bridge that just basically gives you a break from the verses. i also reworked it for guitar so it is less boring. i have not recorded the new version yet.<br>
+[[User:Sara|Sara]] 11:30, 16 December 2006 (PST): i scrapped the middle section and wrote a shorter, vocal-free bridge that just basically gives you a break from the verses. i also reworked it for guitar so it is (theoretically) less boring. i have not recorded the new version yet.<br>
 == Comments ==

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 <br>
 bridge:<br>
-F major 7, A minor, F major 7, A minor, F major 7, A minor, Bb major 7, G major<br>
+F major 7, A minor x 3<br>
 <br>
 outtro:<br>

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 == Lyrics ==
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   get flattened by the feet that pass
   icicle lit by the sun
-  by the same sun all undone
+  by the same sun is undone
-  melodies you've yet to sing
+  the melodies you've yet to sing
   get washed away by lesser things
-  tender arms around you wrapped
+  the tender arms around you wrapped
   could hold you tight or hold you back
   so although it hurts me so
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   you promise like a flower seed
   remind me of what i could need
   your words rain down a soft refrain
-  and fall against my window pane
+  but fall against my window pane
   your arms could briefly trap me here
   but conquering is out my dear
   and so from me you'll never hear
   please stay
   you know when spring is in the air
-  winter is already here
+  winter is already there
-  a season gone will come again
+  the season gone will come again
   the world will turn around again
   but i grow tired of wondering when
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 == Music ==
 === Chords ===
-verse: C major, D major, Bb major, G major<br>
+verse:<br>
-chorus: C major<br>
+C major, D major, Bb major 7, G major x 3<br>
-bridge1: A minor, F minor, A minor, F minor, A minor, F minor, A minor, Bb major<br>
+C major, D major, Bb major 7, C major x 1<br>
-bridge2: A minor, Bb major, G minor, C major, A minor, Bb major, G minor, C major, G minor, C major<br>
+<br>
-last verse: C major, D major, Bb major, Bb major<br>
+bridge:<br>
-outtro: C major, D major, Bb major, G major, C major, D major, Bb major, G major<br>
+F major 7, A minor, F major 7, A minor, F major 7, A minor, Bb major 7, G major<br>
 === Structure ===
-a-b-a-b-c-d-a-e-f
+a-a-b-a-c
 == Author's Notes ==
-this is the result of an idea my bandmate had that we should write a go away please stay song separately and then try to piece them together. this is just my half. i think the words are kind of unwieldy and reflect that i've been reading a lot of young adult fiction. also the middle section is sort of weird, and the vocals over it are even weirder/stupid words. plus the last verse rips off starlister.<br>
+this is the result of an idea my bandmate had that we should write a go away please stay song separately and then try to piece them together. this is just my half. i think the words are a little unwieldy and reflect that i've been reading a lot of young adult fiction. also the middle section is sort of weird, and the vocals over it are even weirder/stupid words. plus the last verse rips off starlister.<br>
 <br>
 i'm thinking of adding oohs over the verses, or maybe slower words instead of oohs. i want to add more instruments but i kind of want this to be a rock song. rock is hard. haha! urg. i also was up til 3AM writing this.<br>
 <br>
 == Comments ==