Song for a winter's night - Revision history

Conorl at 13:13, 22 December 2008

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Gabemcelwain at 21:12, 15 December 2008

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Conorl at 17:52, 13 December 2008

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[[Category:Songs]]
[[Category:Conor (philadelphia)]]
[[Media:song for a winters night.mp3|song for a winter's night]]

== Lyrics ==

oh the orbs release their light
as their hydrogen ignites
and my love does wander by my side
and sits with me tonight

oh our hearts are filled with love
they are also filled with blood
and our lungs are filled with a winter chill
and also oxygen

== Music ==

===Chords===

C, G, D

===Structure===

verse, verse

== Songwriter Notes ==

wrote this song today right after the new year's song and recorded it on my phone. 4 songs to go in 2008. [[User:Conorl|Conorl]] 09:52, 13 December 2008 (PST)

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 [[Category:Conor (philadelphia)]]
 [[Media:song for a winters night.mp3|song for a winter's night]]<BR>
-[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kNLPqXJyArk |Song for a winter's night (video)]
+[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kNLPqXJyArk Song for a winter's night (video)]
 == Lyrics ==

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 [[Category:Conor (philadelphia)]]
 [[Media:song for a winters night.mp3|song for a winter's night]]<BR>
-[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kNLPqXJyArk|Song for a winter's night (video)]
+[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kNLPqXJyArk |Song for a winter's night (video)]
 == Lyrics ==

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 [[Category:Conor (philadelphia)]]
 [[Media:song for a winters night.mp3|song for a winter's night]]<BR>
-[[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kNLPqXJyArk|Song for a winter's night (video)]]
+[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kNLPqXJyArk|Song for a winter's night (video)]
 == Lyrics ==

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	I like this very much, especially the back and forth comparisons of the last stanza. You use great sort of abstract emotional imagery in some of your lyrics, but you also sometimes use very exact anatomical or biological language, and the direct intersection of those two trends in that second stanza is satisfying. bringing the romantic and the real together, face to face, makes each of them more potent, i think, rather than diffusing one or the other. well played. [[User:Gabemcelwain\|Gabemcelwain]] 13:12, 15 December 2008 (PST)		I like this very much, especially the back and forth comparisons of the last stanza. You use great sort of abstract emotional imagery in some of your lyrics, but you also sometimes use very exact anatomical or biological language, and the direct intersection of those two trends in that second stanza is satisfying. bringing the romantic and the real together, face to face, makes each of them more potent, i think, rather than diffusing one or the other. well played. [[User:Gabemcelwain\|Gabemcelwain]] 13:12, 15 December 2008 (PST)

−	Thanks! At first I was happy with this as a short song, but now I'm thinking it ought to be more complete. I think the verses are heading somewhere, just not sure where yet. Maybe after the year's over I'll revisit this one. This one is quite fun to sing![[User:Conorl\|Conorl]] 13:21, 15 December 2008 (PST)	+	Thanks! At first I was happy with this as a short song, but now I'm thinking it ought to be more complete. I think the verses are heading somewhere, just not sure where yet. Maybe after the year's over I'll revisit this one. This one is quite fun to sing! [[User:Conorl\|Conorl]] 13:21, 15 December 2008 (PST)

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	I like this very much, especially the back and forth comparisons of the last stanza. You use great sort of abstract emotional imagery in some of your lyrics, but you also sometimes use very exact anatomical or biological language, and the direct intersection of those two trends in that second stanza is satisfying. bringing the romantic and the real together, face to face, makes each of them more potent, i think, rather than diffusing one or the other. well played. [[User:Gabemcelwain\|Gabemcelwain]] 13:12, 15 December 2008 (PST)		I like this very much, especially the back and forth comparisons of the last stanza. You use great sort of abstract emotional imagery in some of your lyrics, but you also sometimes use very exact anatomical or biological language, and the direct intersection of those two trends in that second stanza is satisfying. bringing the romantic and the real together, face to face, makes each of them more potent, i think, rather than diffusing one or the other. well played. [[User:Gabemcelwain\|Gabemcelwain]] 13:12, 15 December 2008 (PST)

−	Thanks! At first I was happy with this as a short song, but now I'm thinking it ought to be more complete. I think the verses are heading somewhere, just not sure where yet. Maybe after the year's over I'll revisit this one. ~~Quite~~ fun to sing!	+	Thanks! At first I was happy with this as a short song, but now I'm thinking it ought to be more complete. I think the verses are heading somewhere, just not sure where yet. Maybe after the year's over I'll revisit this one. This one is quite fun to sing![[User:Conorl\|Conorl]] 13:21, 15 December 2008 (PST)

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	== Comments ==		== Comments ==
	I like this very much, especially the back and forth comparisons of the last stanza. You use great sort of abstract emotional imagery in some of your lyrics, but you also sometimes use very exact anatomical or biological language, and the direct intersection of those two trends in that second stanza is satisfying. bringing the romantic and the real together, face to face, makes each of them more potent, i think, rather than diffusing one or the other. well played. [[User:Gabemcelwain\|Gabemcelwain]] 13:12, 15 December 2008 (PST)		I like this very much, especially the back and forth comparisons of the last stanza. You use great sort of abstract emotional imagery in some of your lyrics, but you also sometimes use very exact anatomical or biological language, and the direct intersection of those two trends in that second stanza is satisfying. bringing the romantic and the real together, face to face, makes each of them more potent, i think, rather than diffusing one or the other. well played. [[User:Gabemcelwain\|Gabemcelwain]] 13:12, 15 December 2008 (PST)
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		+	Thanks! At first I was happy with this as a short song, but now I'm thinking it ought to be more complete. I think the verses are heading somewhere, just not sure where yet. Maybe after the year's over I'll revisit this one. Quite fun to sing!

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	wrote this song today right after the new year's song and recorded it on my phone. 4 songs to go in 2008. [[User:Conorl\|Conorl]] 09:52, 13 December 2008 (PST)		wrote this song today right after the new year's song and recorded it on my phone. 4 songs to go in 2008. [[User:Conorl\|Conorl]] 09:52, 13 December 2008 (PST)
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		+	== Comments ==
		+	I like this very much, especially the back and forth comparisons of the last stanza. You use great sort of abstract emotional imagery in some of your lyrics, but you also sometimes use very exact anatomical or biological language, and the direct intersection of those two trends in that second stanza is satisfying. bringing the romantic and the real together, face to face, makes each of them more potent, i think, rather than diffusing one or the other. well played. [[User:Gabemcelwain\|Gabemcelwain]] 13:12, 15 December 2008 (PST)