Talk:Honey I'm Home - Revision history

DannyOBrien at 15:53, 19 March 2008

2008-03-19T15:53:53Z

Gabemcelwain at 17:28, 9 November 2007

2007-11-09T17:28:18Z

Justus at 16:12, 8 November 2007

2007-11-08T16:12:59Z

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First off, let me just preface this by saying that I am absolute sucker for finger picked jazz guitar.

I really like this song on the first few times listening to it. I like the understated vocals I think it emphasizes to the simplicity of the subject.

It feels much longer than the 4:52 advertised.

I would love to see the chords.

-Justus

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		+	Gabe,
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		+	My initial thought on this song was that if you just left it at the first verse and one chorus, it would stand up really well as one little minute-and-a-half, linear, snapshot kind of song. I think if you wanted this to be a pop song, that's probably the way to go--instead of feeling played-out, it would leave the listener wanting more. The downside of that approach is that you would lose some good imagery (the razor, the assembly line) and the extended metaphor of singing a song. If this were a song in a musical, you could parcel out all your great verses separately as a theme threading through a story. Of course, then you'd have to write the rest of the musical... or not.
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		+	hey Justus,
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		+	nice to "see" you. i HATE this recording of this song now. it's by far my least favorite thing on here. i sing it all weird at the beginning, which sounds stupid. the tune is like ten years too long. the bridge really got away from me. and do i really need to do two full stanzas each verse? still, i think the hook is good, and some of the changes are pretty nice.
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		+	i think it could possibly make sense if i cut out the second verse, and did each section differently as part of a big bandy arrangement, a sort of little suite or something. if "suite" is a technical term, i'm sure i'm misusing it.
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		+	i have the chords written down at home, i'll put them up this weekend. thanks fer askin'!
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		+	[[User:Gabemcelwain\|Gabemcelwain]] 09:28, 9 November 2007 (PST)