Difference between revisions of "Look for me"
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you wake up alone | you wake up alone | ||
shake the haze of forgotten dreams | shake the haze of forgotten dreams | ||
| − | + | thoughts thick with unspoken things | |
you walk out alone | you walk out alone | ||
| − | + | gloomy clouds that still the air | |
the sun must be up there somewhere | the sun must be up there somewhere | ||
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i go out alone | i go out alone | ||
lost in mist that pens me in | lost in mist that pens me in | ||
| − | + | vague outline of the shape we're in | |
i think of your smile | i think of your smile | ||
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look for me | look for me | ||
please look for me | please look for me | ||
| + | look for me | ||
you say we're lost | you say we're lost | ||
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== Author's Notes == | == Author's Notes == | ||
| − | this is | + | this is the first recording of my nonband! it is a live studio recording. i wrote the words and melody and someone else wrote and played the guitar part. i think the words are a little ungainly in a few places, particularly the lines with "gloomy" and "mist" in them. and the line "i think of your smile" is so gross. i'm pretty happy with the chorus, i think it walks a fine cheesy line but for some reason it seems more cute than grating. i like the end a lot, although maybe the melody does not make sense in context. there's going to be a bit more of an outtro but it hasn't been written yet. i'll keep updating the mp3 when we add more to it. |
== Comments == | == Comments == | ||
Revision as of 22:52, 17 September 2006
Lyrics
you wake up alone shake the haze of forgotten dreams thoughts thick with unspoken things you walk out alone gloomy clouds that still the air the sun must be up there somewhere open up your eyes see through the fog and find me on any cloudy day i'm waiting look for me i go out alone lost in mist that pens me in vague outline of the shape we're in i think of your smile eyes like sunlight breaking through a warmer world than the one i knew open up your eyes see through the fog and find me on any cloudy day i'll be waiting look for me please look for me look for me you say we're lost i say we're both here so take my hand and it'll be clear
Music
Chords
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Structure
a-b-c-c-a-b-c-c-a-d-e-?
Author's Notes
this is the first recording of my nonband! it is a live studio recording. i wrote the words and melody and someone else wrote and played the guitar part. i think the words are a little ungainly in a few places, particularly the lines with "gloomy" and "mist" in them. and the line "i think of your smile" is so gross. i'm pretty happy with the chorus, i think it walks a fine cheesy line but for some reason it seems more cute than grating. i like the end a lot, although maybe the melody does not make sense in context. there's going to be a bit more of an outtro but it hasn't been written yet. i'll keep updating the mp3 when we add more to it.
