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my, my you were an impressive youth | my, my you were an impressive youth | ||
so bright and blessed with unusual beauty too | so bright and blessed with unusual beauty too | ||
| − | oh time, time it has kind so far | + | oh time, time it has been kind so far |
| − | we quite, quite a lot happier | + | we're quite, quite a lot happier |
| − | and now a married woman oooh | + | and now a married woman oooh-ooh-ooh-ooh |
i'm proud, proud that i knew you when | i'm proud, proud that i knew you when | ||
the time, the time when i so dead wrong | the time, the time when i so dead wrong | ||
| − | you right maybe i'll shut-up | + | you right maybe i'll just shut-up |
| − | and now a married woman oooh | + | and now a married woman oooh-ooh-ooh-ooh |
how about we never fall out of love | how about we never fall out of love | ||
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Verse: G, Bm, Em, Em7, C, G/B, Am, Am/G, D7, G, C, G, D7<br> | Verse: G, Bm, Em, Em7, C, G/B, Am, Am/G, D7, G, C, G, D7<br> | ||
Chorus: Em, C, G, Am, D, D/C, G/B, C, G, D<br> | Chorus: Em, C, G, Am, D, D/C, G/B, C, G, D<br> | ||
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===Structure=== | ===Structure=== | ||
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| + | verse chorus short-verse chorus | ||
== Songwriter Notes == | == Songwriter Notes == | ||
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| + | i wrote the chords for this today after work and recorded them along with one of the few beats that i could make go slow enough for it. then i put a bit crusher on the drums to make them a little gentler. for the words i was thinking about how i keep accidentally introducing deirdre as my girlfriend... which looks totally sketchy when you are clearly wearing a wedding band. i was hoping to write a song to married woman where it could be a little ambiguous as to whether she is married to the singer, or not... not sure how successful this was. oh well. [[User:Conorl|Conorl]] 21:34, 16 February 2009 (PST) | ||
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| + | this is a pretty great song. i love the concept for it, about the ambiguity of the relationship between the singer and the woman in question. i also think it's totally funny how you introduce deirdre as your girlfriend. i think the chords and melody here are good, and i think the arrangement isn't bad, but the drums still seem a little rockin' for the feel. throw in a couple synth pads and some distorted bass and it starts to sound very like the flaming lips, i think. DK should like that. some of the lyrics i'm really into (first two lines, choruses), some i'm not as convinced by, but i'll keep listening. the harmonies on the first chorus are great, i really missed them on the second time around on "married woman", and i'd love to hear you expand them for the whole chorus. | ||
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| + | i am sorry i haven't been able to keep up with you, and write comments for all of these! they're all so interesting! | ||
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| + | [[User:Gabemcelwain|Gabemcelwain]] 13:49, 17 February 2009 (PST) | ||
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| + | yeah, i agree with your assessment on this one. i really struggled to say anything interesting that remained ambiguous in the 2nd and 3rd verse. Oh, and I have a really killer harmony for the second chorus, i recorded it early in the night with different lyrics, but by the time i was recording the final version (around 1am) i didn't have the voice to pull it off. it's way better than the first chorus. I should lay that down. it's killer. [[User:Conorl|Conorl]] 14:00, 17 February 2009 (PST) | ||
Latest revision as of 15:00, 17 February 2009
Lyrics
my, my you were an impressive youth so bright and blessed with unusual beauty too oh time, time it has been kind so far we're quite, quite a lot happier and now a married woman oooh-ooh-ooh-ooh i'm proud, proud that i knew you when the time, the time when i so dead wrong you right maybe i'll just shut-up and now a married woman oooh-ooh-ooh-ooh how about we never fall out of love
Music
Chords
Verse: G, Bm, Em, Em7, C, G/B, Am, Am/G, D7, G, C, G, D7
Chorus: Em, C, G, Am, D, D/C, G/B, C, G, D
(though there are sometimes a few random substitutions and things)
Structure
verse chorus short-verse chorus
Songwriter Notes
i wrote the chords for this today after work and recorded them along with one of the few beats that i could make go slow enough for it. then i put a bit crusher on the drums to make them a little gentler. for the words i was thinking about how i keep accidentally introducing deirdre as my girlfriend... which looks totally sketchy when you are clearly wearing a wedding band. i was hoping to write a song to married woman where it could be a little ambiguous as to whether she is married to the singer, or not... not sure how successful this was. oh well. Conorl 21:34, 16 February 2009 (PST)
Comments
this is a pretty great song. i love the concept for it, about the ambiguity of the relationship between the singer and the woman in question. i also think it's totally funny how you introduce deirdre as your girlfriend. i think the chords and melody here are good, and i think the arrangement isn't bad, but the drums still seem a little rockin' for the feel. throw in a couple synth pads and some distorted bass and it starts to sound very like the flaming lips, i think. DK should like that. some of the lyrics i'm really into (first two lines, choruses), some i'm not as convinced by, but i'll keep listening. the harmonies on the first chorus are great, i really missed them on the second time around on "married woman", and i'd love to hear you expand them for the whole chorus.
i am sorry i haven't been able to keep up with you, and write comments for all of these! they're all so interesting!
Gabemcelwain 13:49, 17 February 2009 (PST)
yeah, i agree with your assessment on this one. i really struggled to say anything interesting that remained ambiguous in the 2nd and 3rd verse. Oh, and I have a really killer harmony for the second chorus, i recorded it early in the night with different lyrics, but by the time i was recording the final version (around 1am) i didn't have the voice to pull it off. it's way better than the first chorus. I should lay that down. it's killer. Conorl 14:00, 17 February 2009 (PST)
