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== Lyrics == | == Lyrics == | ||
| − | + | while we wait | |
| + | while i'm noticing your face | ||
| + | pixilate | ||
| + | oh the days they conjugate | ||
| + | and i long to | ||
| + | long to | ||
| + | hold you | ||
| + | |||
| + | three more weeks | ||
| + | until you land in new jersey | ||
| + | here's the key | ||
| + | well one and one and one is three | ||
| + | oh i long | ||
| + | to long | ||
| + | to hold you | ||
| + | |||
| + | here's the key | ||
| + | well one and one and one is three | ||
| + | |||
| + | oh i long to | ||
| + | long to | ||
| + | oh i long to | ||
| + | oh i long to | ||
| + | oh i long to hold you | ||
== Music == | == Music == | ||
===Chords=== | ===Chords=== | ||
| + | |||
| + | I tuned my guitar down, but it's something like this | ||
| + | |||
| + | verse: G | ||
| + | |||
| + | chorus: F, Am, F, C, C, G | ||
===Structure=== | ===Structure=== | ||
| + | |||
| + | verse, chorus, verse, chorus, short verse, chorus | ||
== Songwriter Notes == | == Songwriter Notes == | ||
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| + | hadn't written a song in a while and i wanted to knock one out today. the words are a bit silly, but i like the groove and the sound. might be worth revisiting this someday.[[User:Conorl|Conorl]] 18:32, 19 July 2009 (PDT) | ||
| + | ==Comments== | ||
| + | Man, this song is weird! It's very 80s somehow. The beats are almost unsustainably funky! What a groove! You should put some kind of groovy bass line on there. Between that, the synths, and the funky beat, this is practically a Prince song. Yeah, there's definitely some things here worth coming back for when you want to do another pass. Nice to see some mroe stuff! Keep up the good work, man. [[User:Gabemcelwain|Gabemcelwain]] 08:26, 23 July 2009 (PDT) | ||
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| + | yeah, this one is weird, totaly different from my fist demo of the song. Listening back I'm hearing a lot of structural flaws. And i'd like the lyrics to be better. But yeah, there's something interesting in this one. [[User:Conorl|Conorl]] 10:30, 23 July 2009 (PDT) | ||
Latest revision as of 10:30, 23 July 2009
one and one and one is three (mp3)
Lyrics
while we wait while i'm noticing your face pixilate oh the days they conjugate and i long to long to hold you three more weeks until you land in new jersey here's the key well one and one and one is three oh i long to long to hold you here's the key well one and one and one is three oh i long to long to oh i long to oh i long to oh i long to hold you
Music
Chords
I tuned my guitar down, but it's something like this
verse: G
chorus: F, Am, F, C, C, G
Structure
verse, chorus, verse, chorus, short verse, chorus
Songwriter Notes
hadn't written a song in a while and i wanted to knock one out today. the words are a bit silly, but i like the groove and the sound. might be worth revisiting this someday.Conorl 18:32, 19 July 2009 (PDT)
Comments
Man, this song is weird! It's very 80s somehow. The beats are almost unsustainably funky! What a groove! You should put some kind of groovy bass line on there. Between that, the synths, and the funky beat, this is practically a Prince song. Yeah, there's definitely some things here worth coming back for when you want to do another pass. Nice to see some mroe stuff! Keep up the good work, man. Gabemcelwain 08:26, 23 July 2009 (PDT)
yeah, this one is weird, totaly different from my fist demo of the song. Listening back I'm hearing a lot of structural flaws. And i'd like the lyrics to be better. But yeah, there's something interesting in this one. Conorl 10:30, 23 July 2009 (PDT)
