Difference between revisions of "Telescopes"
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== Lyrics == | == Lyrics == | ||
| − | + | telescopes guide the ether from the heavens | |
| + | as we all lie beneath her and look through our lenses | ||
| + | we learn to see by analogies alleluia | ||
| + | oh jesus please forgive me for i do not know ya | ||
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| + | oh yes it might have been a momentary lapse | ||
| + | or happenstance | ||
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| + | would you believe the moon is stealing her luminensence | ||
| + | would you concede our world is reeling through vast expanses | ||
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| + | oh yes it might have been a momentary lapse | ||
| + | or happenstance | ||
== Music == | == Music == | ||
===Chords=== | ===Chords=== | ||
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| + | verse: C/G, E, E7/G#, F, C/G, G chorus: Fmaj7, G, Am, C7, Fmaj7, G7 | ||
===Structure=== | ===Structure=== | ||
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| + | verse verse chorus verse chorus | ||
== Songwriter Notes == | == Songwriter Notes == | ||
| + | The lyrics to this one need some tightening. Also the ending is totally lame. I couldn't figure out how to end it or start it so I had it just cut in and out. [[User:Conorl|Conorl]] 22:32, 9 February 2009 (PST) | ||
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| + | <P>I just realized this mix is awful. Ug. [[User:Conorl|Conorl]] 11:03, 10 February 2009 (PST)</P> | ||
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| + | <P>Listening back now, I think this song has promise, but it needs some serious reworking and refocusing. And perhaps another section, and some adjustments to the melody. I like posing questions to the listener in the last verse. That's nice. It needs a strong follow up though. [[User:Conorl|Conorl]] 08:10, 11 February 2009 (PST) | ||
Latest revision as of 09:11, 11 February 2009
Lyrics
telescopes guide the ether from the heavens as we all lie beneath her and look through our lenses we learn to see by analogies alleluia oh jesus please forgive me for i do not know ya oh yes it might have been a momentary lapse or happenstance would you believe the moon is stealing her luminensence would you concede our world is reeling through vast expanses oh yes it might have been a momentary lapse or happenstance
Music
Chords
verse: C/G, E, E7/G#, F, C/G, G chorus: Fmaj7, G, Am, C7, Fmaj7, G7
Structure
verse verse chorus verse chorus
Songwriter Notes
The lyrics to this one need some tightening. Also the ending is totally lame. I couldn't figure out how to end it or start it so I had it just cut in and out. Conorl 22:32, 9 February 2009 (PST)
I just realized this mix is awful. Ug. Conorl 11:03, 10 February 2009 (PST)
Listening back now, I think this song has promise, but it needs some serious reworking and refocusing. And perhaps another section, and some adjustments to the melody. I like posing questions to the listener in the last verse. That's nice. It needs a strong follow up though. Conorl 08:10, 11 February 2009 (PST)
