Telescopes

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telescopes

Lyrics

telescopes guide the ether from the heavens 
as we all lie beneath her and look through our lenses
we learn to see by analogies alleluia
oh jesus please forgive me for i do not know ya

oh yes it might have been a momentary lapse
or happenstance

would you believe the moon is stealing her luminensence
would you concede our world is reeling through vast expanses

oh yes it might have been a momentary lapse
or happenstance

Music

Chords

verse: C/G, E, E7/G#, F, C/G, G chorus: Fmaj7, G, Am, C7, Fmaj7, G7

Structure

verse verse chorus verse chorus

Songwriter Notes

The lyrics to this one need some tightening. Also the ending is totally lame. I couldn't figure out how to end it or start it so I had it just cut in and out. Conorl 22:32, 9 February 2009 (PST)

I just realized this mix is awful. Ug. Conorl 11:03, 10 February 2009 (PST)

Listening back now, I think this song has promise, but it needs some serious reworking and refocusing. And perhaps another section, and some adjustments to the melody. I like posing questions to the listener in the last verse. That's nice. It needs a strong follow up though. Conorl 08:10, 11 February 2009 (PST)