I place this in your care

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i place this in your care (mp3)

Lyrics

secretly releasing memory 
i believe that we were not all this way
so here i place this in your care 
that you might use my life as you see fit
and then but then again 
i surmise that we have had an understanding
and though we argue there's we nothing we could do 
it's all unproved

Music

Chords

G, C, Am, D7 (repeat)

Structure

verse

Songwriter Notes

not sure what to think of this one yet. Conorl 21:01, 13 March 2009 (PDT)

so i'm still not sure about this one. i think it needs a little more kick. the words are a little wishy-washy, and now i'm not that into the way "argue" has the emphasis on the wrong syllable. i was imagining a song in which the singer forgets the first half of the song half way through. here it's supposed to be the "and then, but then again" part. anyway, it's not at all clear. just sounds like bits of phrases floating around, which is ok, but i think the phrases could be better. Conorl 06:24, 17 March 2009 (PDT)